Time Can Be Rewritten… But Probably Shouldn’t Be

Updated 1/4/12

They say that the definition of madness is doing the same thing and expecting a different result. In which case, the eleventh Doctor really is a madman with a box. His messing about with time has brought about the end of the universe twice in the space of 18 months. But he really should know better, given that this incarnation owes his existence to the consequences of rewriting time, in the longest, most complex and most ambitious “story arc” the series has ever attempted.

In World War Three the ninth Doctor says that Harriet Jones’s historic three-term premiership will be remembered as a new Golden Age for Great Britain. Six months later, in pretty much his first act as a fully-cooked incarnation, the tenth Doctor re-writes history and deposes her. And that is his downfall.

Consider that for a moment: the first act of the tenth Doctor’s life is the cause of his downfall.

How so? I’m glad you asked. Harriet Jones’s untimely removal clearly wrought havoc with history. The ninth Doctor unambiguously states that she was known to posterity as a three-term Prime Minister. The tenth Doctor ends her reign after less than a year. Time has been rewritten because the Doctor has decided Harriet Jones is not worthy of her office.

And that opens the way for all kinds of changes. In the general election triggered by her resignation, the victor was Harold Saxon. Now, presumably, the Master (for it is he!) took advantage of time being rewritten to write himself into 10 Downing Street. Certainly, there’s no suggestion that he had to engineer a prime ministerial vacancy, nor resort to the crude methods of the Slitheen. And, once in power, the Master turns the TARDIS into a paradox machine to allow the last of humankind to decimate their ancestors and conquer the Earth, taking further advantage of what is presumably becoming a kind of temporal weak spot.

As we know, the Doctor becomes the Space Jesus and undoes the Master’s time-vexing naughtiness (although not, we note, his own time meddling). And that, it seems, is that. Except exactly one year later, Harriet Jones makes a reappearance, mounts a spirited defence of her own record and the need to defend the Earth – and is exterminated for her efforts by a bunch of Daleks that, in a roundabout way, exist because the locks around the Time War are starting to break down.

So, in the space of two years, the great white hope of Great Britain has been humiliated, deposed and murdered, largely due to the intervention of the Doctor.

And at this point, the Doctor nearly loses his own life – and it’s only thanks to a handy keepsake from his previous encounter with Harriet that he’s able to cheat death. But the threads linking his first adventure and his eventual death are starting to draw together.

And it gets worse. The Master, as usual, had a Plan B. Saxon’s followers organise his resurrection just in time to take advantage of the Immortality Gate (which, incidentally, is a piece of alien technology that would surely have been snapped up by Torchwood had the tenth Doctor not also brought them down), which in turn allows the Master, in a slightly roundabout way, to finally break the locks and release the Time Lords from their imprisonment at the end of the Time War.

And once the Time Lords return, it really is the end for the Doctor. And all this because he has rewritten time in a small act of spite against one woman.

I think this is a deliberate and clever story that Russell T Davies played in the background of David Tennant’s time as the Doctor. Certainly in interviews, Davies has said that Saxon emerged just after the fall of Harriet Jones to take an advantage of a new gap in history. And there is something ultimately right in seeing perhaps the most cocky Doctor undone by an unthinking moment of over-confidence, as though this incarnation is being punished for his character flaw in the same way Troughton’s Doctor had to finally stay behind to clear up the results of his anarchy, or Pertwee’s Doctor paid the price for his own intellectual pride.

And for viewers who haven’t followed four series worth of plot unfolding, Russell T Davies kindly re-plays the tenth Doctor’s hubris in miniature in The Waters of Mars. Saving Adelaide Brooke is presented as the action of a man who thinks he is above the law – who, if you like, has risen higher than ever before. But in changing history, the Doctor fails to save Adelaide, The lesson the Doctor takes from that story is time can be rewritten – but the consequences are unpredictable and horrifying. And he seems to grasp that he will not survive it: his reaction to Adelaide’s death and the appearance of Ood Sigma: “Is this it? My death?” In the following episode, we learn that events from the Doctor’s past are now impacting on his present and the future. “Time itself is bleeding,” says the Ood Elder. And the Doctor is the one who made the first cut.

All the way through the Russell T Davies years the series has looked over its shoulder at the Hartnell era, when the Doctor would not even save one young girl from the Massacre for fear of altering time. Father’s Day showed the consequences of altering established history. The Fires of Pompeii directly addresses the fate of Anne Chaplet by having the Doctor relent and rescue Caecilius and his family from Vesuvius.

But the ultimate lesson Davies leaves us with is that even the Doctor is not above the law: that he can’t just go about changing history to suit himself, or to guarantee that, say, a grumpy miser will do as he’s told at Christmas. Trying to cheat, to alter the facts to fit your views, is the kind of self-destructive behaviour we expect from the villains, not the Doctor. It’s a lesson his next incarnation seems to have forgotten, but which, perhaps, he needs to re-learn if he’s to avoid a similar fall.

In this instance, Genesis of the Daleks is a good reference point: the fourth Doctor’s much-quoted “Do I have the right?” speech isn’t really about whether he has the right to kill the Daleks – he’s done that many times before – it’s about whether he has the right to re-write time. Taken alongside Davros’s earlier speech about genocide setting him up above the gods, the Doctor is reflecting that if he does play God and chooses to change history, he puts himself in a similar position – and he has to then take responsibility for the consequences of his choice, which in this case includes a whole new timeline. Or, to put it in Davies’ own words, “If you could choose, Doctor, if you could decide who lives and who dies… That would make you a monster.” Time can be rewritten, says Russell T Davies, but if you do, you become a monster.

The whole Moffat era so far seems to be circling a similar conclusion without quite reaching it (yet). The eleventh Doctor’s careless manipulation of history is undermining the whole morality of the series. Kazran Sardick’s personality is changed so the Doctor can get out of a tight spot. The sequence of cause and effect has been cheated, with sonic screwdrivers appearing from nowhere to save the day. Death loses all meaning. Actions no longer have consequences, and therefore no-one needs to take responsibility. History is now the Doctor’s playground, and we are his playthings. No wonder every nightmare in the universe formed an alliance against him: the Doctor has become the biggest monster of all.

Mean Wiles… Waiting for God

I’ve been reading the first Kindle volume of Philip Sandifer’s TARDIS Eruditorum, and have been thoroughly enjoying it (Troughton soon please!). I’ve been particularly interested in Sandifer’s surprisingly vehement and provocative views on the run of episodes between The Myth Makers and The Ark:

“For all his skill in making a good programme, the fact of the matter is, the 24 episodes produced by John Wiles are mean-spirited, reactionary, and, frankly, in the final analysis, racist.”

While I think this reads rather too much into Maureen O’Brien being sacked, and the general rubbishness of Dodo, I do think there are significant problems with Wiles’ episodes which Sandifer’s book reminded me of. And in my mind they are problems that are almost exactly similar to the creative issues that plagued the programme during the mid-1980s: a gaping void where the Doctor is supposed to be.

Wiles produced The Myth Makers, a comedy for three quarters of its length, which ends with an infamously bleak massacre of its characters, the abrupt and downbeat departure of Vicki, and Steven mortally wounded. Four episodes later, Vicki’s replacement as “girl companion”, Katarina, is killed off, and eight episodes after that, her replacement, Sara, goes the same way. Then we have a story which is explicitly about practically everybody being horribly killed – even the Doctor (or at least, his double), and finally an adventure that almost has the TARDIS crew casually wipe out the last remnants of humankind just because of their reckless arrival on the space ark. This isn’t just about shaking the show up after the cosy comedy of Season Two. It’s a sustained assault on the Doctor himself by a producer who, you sense, just cannot believe in the character’s essential heroism and “goodness”.

In the Wiles episodes, every victory is achieved only at a terrible cost – if there is any victory at all. The Myth Makers and The Massacre are about the Doctor and Steven merely surviving their ordeals. In The Ark, they stop humankind dying out, but condemn the weakened survivors to domination by the Monoids. Companions die. The Doctor brings destruction in his wake. This is a long way from one year before, when the Doctor could reverse the Dalek Invasion, unmask Bennett, outwit Nero, and trounce the Morok Empire without breaking into a sweat.

Perhaps Wiles thought the Doctor was too powerful. Perhaps Hartnell’s act as a kind of senile delinquent giggling his way through time and space was an inappropriate response to Viking raids and the enslavement of the ant people. It won’t be the last time in the programme’s history that an incoming producer has deemed things “too silly” and vowed to bring a new sense of seriousness. But in so doing, the baby has been thrown out with the bathwater. The Doctor is suddenly ineffectual, and shown to be ineffectual because not only can he not save everyone, but he can’t even save anyone. Katarina escapes from Troy, but her death is only deferred. Sara doesn’t outlive her first adventure. Anne Chaplet must remain in Sixteenth Century France to face her doom. That last failure is so jarring and so fixed in fan memory that 40 years later The Fires of Pompeii directly addresses it.

And the problem is not only that the Doctor fails – the serialised format of the classic series means that most stories rely on the Doctor not succeeding for large chunks of time – but that he fails at the critical moments even to save the people he most cares about. The same problem crops up again in the mid 1980s: Adric dies, Tegan leaves after a breakdown, Peri either dies or else is abandoned. The Doctor continually leaves a vast body count in his wake so that every planet he lands on resembles a crime scene, and he bemoans the fact that “there should have been another way”. And in some ways the problem in the 1980s is less egregious because Eric Saward takes it to the logical extreme by having the Doctor put on trial and revealed to be the ultimate foe, after which there’s really nowhere else you can go with the idea (and wisely, Saward’s replacement didn’t even bother to try). Wiles, meanwhile, just seems to shrug his shoulders, sigh and walk away.

To Sandifer, this lack of resolution represents a “ludicrous failure… to quite resolve the ongoing plot arc of the Doctor’s inadequacy.” I’m not entirely sure I accept Sandifer’s premise. The Doctor’s inadequacy in Season Three is less a story arc and more the failure of the imagination of a producer who apparently despised his leading man and had no natural sympathy for the programme. Or to put it another way, Wiles genuinely thinks the Doctor is not up to saving the universe. And perhaps far from being “mean spirited and reactionary”, there’s a different cause. In an interview with DWM, Wiles alludes to an idea he had for the Doctor meeting God, in much the same way as Captain Kirk in Star Trek V. He says, “Of course it would be proven all is not as it seemed.” The subtext I see is that Wiles can’t believe in gods and heroes (and see The Myth Makers for another hint of this), and that includes the Doctor. Only we can save ourselves. I think Russell T Davies addresses this by having especially the ninth Doctor inspire us to take control of our own destinies. But Wiles never comes up with such a compelling alternative, and so ends up as the grumpy old man who tells kids there’s no such thing as Father Christmas. Basically, Kazran Sardick was producing Doctor Who in 1965-66.

A Podcast to the Curious

Over the last fortnight I’ve been listening to the first 10 installments of A Podcast to the Curious – a story-by-story journey through the M.R. James canon. As a relative newcomer to podcasts, I’ve thoroughly enjoyed the banter between the hosts, Mike and Will. What I particularly like about the podcast is that the hosts do their homework beforehand – and include their sources and research on their website, here), referring, for example, to Warnings to the Curious, the splendid collection of critical writing on James, and to the Michael Cox biography. This means that their obvious enthusiasm for the stories is backed up by some informed insights that inspired this listener to pick up his hallowed copy of A Pleasing Terror and to read some of the tales with a new perspective.

So far, the podcast has covered all the tales in Ghost Stories of an Antiquary – James’s most well-known volume. So it’s a perfect moment to catch up, and then launch with them into More Ghost Stories of an Antiquary. I’m particularly looking forward to the hosts covering A Thin Ghost, James’s least-loved collection, and some of the less-studied stories such as ‘The Fenstanton Witch’, which will be tougher to research but therefore have a lot that’s new to say.

The podcast is available on iTunes, and you can also follow Mike and Will on Facebook and Twitter.

The Night Comes On, by Steve Duffy

Available now as an e-book from Ash Tree Press, this 1998 collection of short stories is an admiring pastiche of M.R. James’s style which contains 20 tales, mainly set between the two World Wars. Duffy is an award-winning writer, and the quality shows through in every story – not one is without at least one shiver, and as a whole the collection sticks loyally to James’s rules, particularly that ghosts should be malevolent, and furious at the living. Even A.N.L. Munby had some friendly phantoms – but not Duffy. All his spooks are meant to frighten. And all of them seem to have their roots in an older world of Pagan rituals and black magic, of curses and Faustian pacts, so that modern civilisation is never more than a thin veneer over something dark and unknowable.

The weakness of the collection is that it frequently wears its influences too heavily, which means the reader begins playing a game of “spot the James story” rather than enjoying Duffy’s prose on its own merits. So, for instance, ‘The Close at Chadminster’ is another ‘Episode of Cathedral History’, ‘The Last of the Scarisfields’ is apparently inspired by ‘Lost Hearts’, though with a neat twist, while ‘The Hunter and His Quarry’ is more or less a re-write of Count Magnus. Perhaps the best synthesis of James’s approach with Duffy’s Pagan monsters is ‘Figures on a Hillside’, which features antiquarians uncovering a hillside giant – and in so doing unleashing something awful, hunched and spidery.

Equally, the ghosts themselves owe an immense debt to James’s thin, spiderlike and hairy, and invariably thoroughly tangible, apparitions. And so in ‘The Vicar of Wryde St Luke’ – a story that is so indebted to ‘Canon Alberic’s Scrap-Book’ that Dennistoun is name-checked – the monstrous guardian of a grimoire is of the same genus as the beast in the James story. Elsewhere, the gaunt keepers of a cursed book that is more than it appears have the same cobwebbed, dessicated visages as the watcher of ‘The Tractate Middoth’. And occasionally Duffy’s turn of phrase is drawn directly from James, such as the publican found “dead and black” just like Sir Matthew Fell.

In general, though, Duffy is less adept as James at revealing his horrors. Though famed for his reticence, James’s most outstanding moments of terror are depicted with sudden, startling clarity – as a horrible shape in the shadows suddenly illuminated by a flash of lightning. We remember, for example, the vast brown, mewling spiders in ‘The Ash Tree’, or that intensely horrible face of crumpled linen. Duffy’s ‘Out of the Water, Out of the Earth’ has overtones of ‘The Treasure of Abbot Thomas’ with its hellish horrors emerging from an ancient well. But while James gave us a few telling and lingeringly nasty details about the amphibian Guardian of his treasure, Duffy’s monsters are left vague and rather abstract, and so fail to stick in the mind after the story ends and the lights go out.

By contrast, the best stories – including ‘The Night Comes On’, with its muggy Egyptology and furiously vengeful monster, and ‘Running Dogs’ which features a memorably sinister isolated railway station and a rather Aickmanesque sense of oppressive doom – have an inter-war period style of their own, which nods to James without slavishly following him. ‘The Story of a Malediction’ by contrast takes James’s idea of visiting disproportionately harsh punishments on his hapless victims to an unforgettably horrifying extreme, as a bystander in a dispute with Satanist gypsies is hunted down by a phantom straight out of Le Fanu’s ‘Green Tea’. In its cold, unblinking perspective on an arbitrary, unfathomable universe, careless to the existence of human beings, it’s as bleak a tale as there can be.

I enjoyed this collection, and at his best Duffy probably comes closer than any of his contemporaries to successfully evoking the Jamesian style in any sustained way. Certainly, if you’re a fan of James you can’t help but enjoy this. And at about £5.00 the e-book is too good not to buy.

Doctor Who and the Daleks, by David Whitaker

Doctor Who and the Daleks

The first three Target Books, released in May 1973, were actually reprints of novelisations published in 1964, and so the style of the subsequent novelisations of the early 1970s came from books already a decade old.

Doctor Who and the Daleks sets that style very well, although it’s much longer than the later norm (150 pages of small print against the usual 120 pages). Although clearly written for children, it has the same kind of feel as, say, Susan Cooper’s writing for Puffin: that is, it’s pretty dark in places. It begins with a car crash, there’s a dead body on the third page, the Doctor is initially presented as a malevolent alien (mellowing gradually as the book goes on), and the Thal death scenes are rather horrible.

This is certainly more graphic than on TV: for instance, we only saw the claw of a Dalek mutant whereas here, Whitaker describes them as evil imps covered in slime with a single, alien eye. There are very few laughs (except unintentionally: Ian’s obsession with the TARDIS’s toilet facilities provoking one). In some ways it’s less subtle – Ian and Barbara’s budding relationship unfolds as a slightly embarrassing sub-plot – but mostly this condenses 170 minutes of TV action into a crisply effective and very readable book. It probably helps that it was written by the programme’s original script editor, who must have been used to reshaping other people’s scripts for time or effect.

And there are some expedient changes from the broadcast version (Susan Foreman is re-christened Susan English to emphasise that she’s an alien posing as a British schoolgirl; Barbara’s relationship with Ganatus is excised because she’s now all a-flutter for Ian). The most significant is to give the Daleks a leader, a glass Dalek, which hints at Whitaker’s later creation of the Dalek Emperor and has no onscreen precedent (although it obviously did inspire the makers of Revelation of the Daleks 20 years on). Ian’s confrontation with this very specific Dalek adds a bit of weight to the book’s climax which makes it preferable to the relatively weak TV version.  For the most part, though, it’s a faithful adaptation, with Whitaker taking the opportunity to make cosmetic tweaks and streamline some of the baggy midsections of Terry Nation’s scripts to the overall benefit of the story.

Interestingly, the 1964 edition of Doctor Who and the Daleks was titled “Doctor Who” – the reference to an exciting adventure with the Daleks was merely a tagline. That helps to make sense of the opening, which re-imagines the TV pilot episode into a brutal, terse and gripping encounter on Barnes Common. Therefore, this isn’t just a novelisation of The Daleks, it’s Doctor Who’s original script editor setting out the series’ premise (and in so doing making me wonder quite how much he input to Anthony Coburn’s scripts for An Unearthly Child).

When I first read these novelisations, probably aged about 6 or 7, I gave them a mark. For the Pertwee novels onwards this was a normal 1-5 star rating. Oddly (and I was obviously an OCD fan even then), I rated the “black and white” stories differently, assigning a Grade from 1 (“excellent”) to 5 (“boring”). Doctor Who and the Daleks rated a Grade 3 (“good”). Given that my copy is very dog eared and held together with sellotape, I think I was being ungenerous. This is a great start.Young me's rating for Doctor Who and the Daleks

Clichés: Chapter 5 is entitled “Escape Into Danger” which is near enough to “Escape to Danger” to qualify. The creatures in the Lake of Mutations are as big as a house – the first of many monsters that will be much larger than onscreen.